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Recently, Tina Helmuth posted a critique of chapter one of my current work in progress How to Become a Bible Character. You can see the critique at http://tinahelmuth.blogspot.com/2007/10/how-to-become-bible-character.html. I especially appreciate the work she put in because she didn't charge me for her efforts. I have made some changes since then. Below you will find chapter one as it stands right now.